Ladies. How does this sound as a greeting for V-Day flowers?

These are for my eye doctor. Wonderful woman, can't stop thinking about her. She seems into me so I'm sending flowers. This is what I have for a greeting. Please let me know what you think and if I need to add/remove/or change anything.







I feel it would be a tragedy if a woman such as yourself doesn't receive roses at work on Valentine's Day. Thank you again for taking such good care of me.
Ladies. How does this sound as a greeting for V-Day flowers?
AWwwwwwwwwwwww.....I like that idea alot. Good luck ;)
Reply:um...kinda sounds like she is a charity case. no offence...

maybe something neutral but sweet like:

because of you, colours seem so much brighter... like these flowers....but they don't hold a candle to your smile...happy valentines day (it totally depends on your version of how "into you" she is)
Reply:It's really cute. I think she would really like it!
Reply:I feel it would be a tragedy if a woman such as yourself doesn't receive roses on Valentines Day. If it werent for you, my eyes wouldnt see the beauty in front of me. Thank you for taking such good care of my eyes. :)
Reply:First of all....I hope that you're sure that she is into you, otherwise it would be kinda embarrassing.

You should also find out if she's married/bf, etc, because you could get her into trouble with her other half....if you know what I mean.
Reply:thats great man you have to do that, make sure the next time you see her you tell her how you feel or ask her out, to a movie for lunch or just whatever..just do something so you wont regret it later